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The Mysterious Door By Jaden
One day there was was a magic door that only came to earth every 100 years in it there was
10 million hot chips in side It . All you had to do was find the door every time it aperd it was not in the same.
But this time it was in the middle of nowhere it was in the middle of desert some people10 million hot chips in side It . All you had to do was find the door every time it aperd it was not in the same.
found it by walking around trying to find food.
once they found it they opened the door and they saw the chips they ran inside and ate them all. They went to leave and as soon as they were all out it discaperd they looked around and couldn't find it. They went back to there tent and fell a sleep.
The End
Thats a cool story. Imagine finding a secret door with all those hot chips. Were they cold by the time people found the door? I would be so full if i ate that many hot chips.
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