Wednesday, 29 August 2018

Wide Reading Response By Jaden

Reading Response By Jaden

Title: Consequences              
Main character: Digby
Text Type: Fiction
Author: Jill Eggleton


Synopsis: One day in summer a brother and sister needed to walk a dog. And they needed some pocket money as well so they decided go to an apple orchard they tied the dog on the fence so they could pick some apples to sell. But they found a mushroom and got distracted they still had Digby on the fence when they looked up he was gone. They went looking him but they couldn't see him but then they went to the animal shelter and found him they were going to call the number on the name tag. But they got there just in time and it wasn't even there dog So they would of called the owner of dog.


An interesting relationship is between Jill and her brother they both work together with each other like when digby the dog  was lost they worked together to find him. And also when they were collecting apples they both collected apples to make some pocket money by selling apples. Because they want to buy some                  .


My favorite character is Digby because he one of the only characters that is described Digby likes to snap at flies, run and he also yaps at stuff paseal owner is called Gabby. Gabby doesn't like people looking after Digby that much I think she doesn't Digby to get lost like he does in the story.


I think the author chose the title to show the consequences of what you do. A way the author shows that that is why she chose the text is when Jill and her brother were looking after Digby the dog. And they got distracted in a mushroom and forgot about Digby. And some stranger thought that the owner was not around so she took Digby to the animal shelter.

Friday, 17 August 2018

The Coming Storm By Jaden

The Coming Storm By Jaden

         
       There was a storm coming and it was going to blow all the houses roof off and everyone had to run they were running so fast that everyone lost their legs… now they were handstanding.They lost their arms so they started dragging themselves and storm got them the end.
      

Friday, 10 August 2018

The Mysterious Door By Jaden

This is my story of the mysterious door that I have done. My writing goal is to use complex
punctuation hope you enjoy


 The Mysterious Door By Jaden


One day there was was a magic door that only came to earth every 100 years in it there was
10 million hot chips in side It . All you had to do was find the door every time it aperd it was not in the same.
But this time it was in the middle of nowhere it was in the middle of desert some people
found it by walking around trying to find food.
once they found it they opened the door and they saw the chips they ran inside and ate them all. They went to leave and as soon as they were all out it discaperd they looked around and couldn't find it. They went back to there tent and fell a sleep.

                                                               The End

Friday, 3 August 2018

Catch Me If You Can By Jaden

Catch Me If You Can by Jaden




 One day there was a scuba diver and he was looking for fish he found some color full fish
and some normal plane fish BUT THEN… saw a shark he thought about swimming away very fast but he wanted to get a cool photo so he went closer and closer. He got close and he
wanted to just get away form the the shark he got really scared he still was going closer he
was going to go under it.It looked at him he got really scared he went to swim away and then
it started chasing him he turned around and swam so fast that flash couldn't even keep up to
him. He got away and saw another shark he really wanted a photo he went down real fast
he got under it and he put the camera in the water and swam under it. Took the picture and
got right out of there and here's the picture.